There have indeed been a lot of boinking scenes (and I that has to be a personal record for the use of that particular word in a period of less than two days!) in Spuffy fan fiction, but the significant majority of them are so wildly unrealistic I've occasionally speculated on whether or not the writers have actually ever had sex themselves and are just copying from some florid romance novel. "Throbbing memebers", "glistening folds"... Oh please! You kept everyone is character and still managed to be entertaining. Though I suppose it's possible that you're just a better writer than average!
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Date: 2006-07-19 10:24 pm (UTC)