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Dreidel, Chapter Two
Sep. 4th, 2006 03:36 pmHere's some of the stuff I stole from JustSue. That doesn't make her in any way to blame for this fic, send all law suits my way. If any actual lines have snuck in there that was by accident, but the whole setup for the next couple of chapters is lifted from her fic Buyer Beware.
I tweaked Chapter two a little, mostly in response to comments, to make it clearer and Buffy more sympathetic, but not enough that it needs rereading for this to make sense. In fact I'm still not happy with it, probably tweak it again next week. I wanted to have Buffy concerned and firmly not showing it and obviously I didn't get that across, now I still don't but it's clunkier. Thanks again to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
slackerace for continuing to beta even though I make up words. So yeah, here's Chapter Three.
( Dreidel )
I'm going away for a very long weekend, unlikely to be online again for at least a week so forgive me if I'm even laxer about replying to comments than usual. I do read them, treasure them, and try to correct my fic accordingly.
I tweaked Chapter two a little, mostly in response to comments, to make it clearer and Buffy more sympathetic, but not enough that it needs rereading for this to make sense. In fact I'm still not happy with it, probably tweak it again next week. I wanted to have Buffy concerned and firmly not showing it and obviously I didn't get that across, now I still don't but it's clunkier. Thanks again to
slackerace for continuing to beta even though I make up words. So yeah, here's Chapter Three.( Dreidel )
I'm going away for a very long weekend, unlikely to be online again for at least a week so forgive me if I'm even laxer about replying to comments than usual. I do read them, treasure them, and try to correct my fic accordingly.
